My lighting intention did not change, I did the exact same thing as I had in the lighting diagram.
The shutter speed I used was not right, after Pierre showed me to match the outdoor light I need a something more around 1/60th @ F. 5.6.

The background still seems a little too dark for my liking but it was difficult to make it brighter without having the models lighting go to bright.
I also had to move around several times to make sure the model did not have a beam sticking out of their head.

The lens was perfect for the crop I needed,  I could be further away and yet because of the use of the tripod have the perfect composition that I desired.